how sweet the awaiting is ……….

11 Nov

Moon, Jupiter, Ganymede, and Jet

one in the blue dark sky

another in the pool of my thoughts

how beautiful the Moon is…..

silky white clouds flying like swans

slowly opened the windows of my soul

dark blue sky with studded diamond stars

awakens the shadows of my sleeping desires

behind the top of the hill, the desires of Moon appears to be hide out

from the bottom of the hill, the thoughts of stream overflowing in to the slopes

Moon nears to the western ends , still the doors of my love not opened yet

how sweet  the awaiting is ……….


Posted by on November 11, 2012 in Uncategorized


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31 responses to “how sweet the awaiting is ……….

  1. Waywardspirit

    November 11, 2012 at 5:35 am

    This one
    better with every taste
    by sips
    drinking the moon

  2. jalal michael sabbagh.

    November 28, 2012 at 6:00 pm

    Exceptional poem.Fantastic imagination and thoughts,while l was reading the poem l pictured the whole thing at Swan lake.Jalal(thank you for visiting my site.)

  3. Wendell A. Brown

    November 29, 2012 at 4:21 pm

    Your words danced in my heart, and made my spirit shine…there is so much passion in them my brother for the one whom you adore! Great write my brother!

  4. Daydreamertoo

    November 30, 2012 at 1:51 am

    Ahhh…the moon…one of my favourite topics… (Being Cancer Star sign, water is another)
    Thanks for visiting my blog.
    This is beautiful.

  5. jalal michael sabbagh.

    December 5, 2012 at 9:15 pm

    Thank you for liking my new post(Enemies….)Wishing you a wonderful holidays season.jalal

  6. Daydreamertoo

    December 23, 2012 at 2:17 am

    Thank you for the visit. You are very kind.

  7. gita4elamats

    January 2, 2013 at 4:29 am

    Great poem!

  8. The Other Side of Ugly

    January 8, 2013 at 1:41 am

    I love this…

  9. ohlidia

    January 9, 2013 at 4:59 pm

    Thanks for stopping by. Love your poetry!

  10. Nativegrl77

    January 9, 2013 at 10:30 pm

    Thank you for stopping by … the poetry … thoughtful

  11. Bob Lee

    January 21, 2013 at 3:52 pm

    You brought me right into the night looking at the moon and thinking – how sweet the awaiting is – especially to experience love … beautiful poetry

  12. jericho777

    February 3, 2013 at 6:06 am

    Reblogged this on Jericho777's Blog.

    • advocatemmmohan

      February 3, 2013 at 6:17 am

      thank u very much for reblog
      with regards

  13. Christopher Snell

    February 21, 2013 at 12:18 am

    Greetings from one old soul to another, I love your spiritual love-affair with your surroundings, that passion and excitement that boils over the heart, and has to be expressed. Thank you for taking the time to blog this, for us all to reflect.

  14. carolynpageabc

    February 21, 2013 at 2:32 am

    Wonderful… It leaves me feeling very wistful, and full of hope…

  15. BeWithUs

    December 24, 2013 at 6:03 pm

    Merry Christmas, my friend! All the best to you and your loved ones in year 2014.

    Cheers!! 😀


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