Much painful
English: Image of comet C/1996 B2 (Hyakutake), taken on 1996 March 25, with a 225mm f/2.0 Schmidt Camera (focal length 450mm) on Kodak Panther 400 color slide film. Exposure 0:56 to 1:06 UT (10 minutes). The field shown is about 6.5°x4.8°. Note the prominent disconnection event in the comet’s ion tail. Stars in the image appear trailed, as the camera tracked the comet during the exposure. (Photo credit: Wikipedia)
If a flower bit the heart like a spike
Great deceit
if a honey cup turned as vicious golden cask
More Agony
if a beautiful violin played only funeral ceremony tunes
Despite of it
all can be bearable
but
how can I bear
if you deceit me leaving my faith to the commets
[ dedicated to mourning young widows who lost their husbands suddenly ]
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Wildflower Women
May 26, 2013 at 8:45 pm
As a young widow who lost her husband suddenly, I thank you for this dedication.
advocatemmmohan
May 26, 2013 at 9:28 pm
thank u
Wendell A. Brown
May 26, 2013 at 11:37 pm
A very lovely poem and message my brother!
advocatemmmohan
May 27, 2013 at 6:34 am
thank u
johannisthinking
May 29, 2013 at 7:33 pm
human pain…immense…poignantly stated! too much suffering in this world…if we all believed a bit more…and were willing to share LIGHT instead of darkness…My sympathy to the young women who have lost their husbands…my heart goes out to them.
Namaste!
advocatemmmohan
May 29, 2013 at 7:34 pm
thank u
johannisthinking
May 29, 2013 at 7:34 pm
Deceit is well described: “flower bit the heart like a spike”—–profoundly felt!
advocatemmmohan
May 29, 2013 at 7:40 pm
thank u very much