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Oh – My love

22 Oct

English: Withered Hibiscus Italiano: Fiore d’i...

Yours….

friendship……

No one can give up his breathe

Corner bench tossed empty looks

Scribed names on trunk murmured about us

Withered promises scattered like dry leaves on soil

Cracklings of dry leaves for every heavy step groaning pain

Come on………..

Oh — my love …………

Like monsoon rain……………

Let our love sprout again on this manure of memories with new vigor

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16 Comments

Posted by on October 22, 2013 in Uncategorized

 

16 responses to “Oh – My love

  1. pleisbilongtumi

    October 22, 2013 at 5:45 pm

    Very nice poem.

     
  2. readinpleasure

    October 22, 2013 at 9:03 pm

    lovely words

     
  3. Heta Gala

    October 23, 2013 at 4:32 pm

    Too good.. 🙂 .i jus loved de words and every phrases

     
  4. BroadBlogs

    October 23, 2013 at 9:46 pm

    love ………… Like monsoon rain.

    Love it.

     
  5. Chojesús

    October 24, 2013 at 1:42 am

    ¡Bellísimo poema! Me ha encantado.
    Un abrazo!

     
  6. silentlyheardonce

    October 24, 2013 at 11:58 am

    Every heavy step groan pain. Great line.

     
    • advocatemmmohan

      October 24, 2013 at 12:00 pm

      Yes-
      thank u very much for sharing your valuable thoughts
      with regards

       
  7. kaligrafinusantaraonline

    October 24, 2013 at 6:52 pm

    very nice

     

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