Hey – Rain
Stop – Stop
Enough to stop
your VICIOUS SLASHES .
You slayed some precious lives
You washed away their life needs
You drove them on road as Paupers
You could not see their tears in your rain
You could not hear their crys in your thunder roars
You too joined the group of vicious circles like Politicians
You have to rain like a breeze of pearls but not like a storm of perils
( Monsoon rains left with perils but not pearls in the lives of A.P. farmers )
Maria M
October 27, 2013 at 2:23 pm
Your poem awakened a whole string of thoughts in my head reminding me why we in Ireland give to our volunteers who work abroad helping those who go through suffering like this. We are lucky rain here is a gentle continuous shower, though we complain about it, we shouldn’t. We also forget how vicious nature is.
advocatemmmohan
October 27, 2013 at 3:49 pm
thank u very much for sharing your thoughts – Where the rains are gentle , there the richness cherish beautifully .
Have a happy Sunday
with regards
pleisbilongtumi
October 27, 2013 at 4:01 pm
Just Pretty nice prayer. Thank you.
advocatemmmohan
October 27, 2013 at 5:08 pm
thank u very much
with regards
Rotze Mardini
October 27, 2013 at 10:33 pm
Wonderful poem.
Have a good day.
advocatemmmohan
October 27, 2013 at 10:35 pm
thank u very much
wishing you the same
with regards
AinaBalagtas
October 28, 2013 at 2:23 pm
Evocative!
advocatemmmohan
October 28, 2013 at 2:31 pm
thank u very much
with regards
readinpleasure
October 30, 2013 at 7:07 pm
Deep!
advocatemmmohan
October 30, 2013 at 7:44 pm
thank u very much
with regards